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a twisted panorama composed of photos i took at mount feake cemetary in waltham, massachusetts.
across the icy river is the old watch factory.
actual dimensions 16500 x 5222 pixels.
february 2010.



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Image size
2844x900px 2.95 MB
Make
SONY
Model
DSC-V3
Shutter Speed
10/2500 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
7 mm
ISO Speed
100
Date Taken
Feb 21, 2010, 3:33:00 PM
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

This is very interesting <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin) - :D"/> I haven't seen such a collage yet. The tonation looks good, it's quite equal everywhere. I think you could add some more contrast here, though. Perhaps make the blue stronger. Or give it stronger blacks and whites, that would work too.
I like the photos you've joined here, but sometimes the way they blend into each others is too harsh, the edges are too visible. You should different combinations to make it look more consistent, it would improve it a lot. I mean the bottom of the work, the top looks good. I'm not sure about that pink building on the left, it's a quite a lot of contrast, draws attention too much.

But again it's a really original idea <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin) - :D"/>